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Jaygre
02/18/2005, 01:43 AM
Thanks to D2E2 I gave a shot at working more with layers and comps and masks. The only reality is the sail, which I took from a shot of a Canna Flower.

down2earth2
02/18/2005, 02:27 AM
[QUOTE=Jaygre]The only reality is the sail, which I took from a shot of a Canna Flower.[/QUOTE]

A shot of a Canna Flower!!! That is so wild! Great creation.

Scott
02/18/2005, 02:35 AM
Love the mood of the top image Jaygre. I think the additional contrast of the bottom image actually detracts from it.

swillox
02/18/2005, 04:57 AM
^^^agreed, but my very first impression was that it was a bit flat... maybe making the upper far background somwhat stormyer.,?

but hey,... good at all.

burndog
02/24/2005, 02:10 PM
great job on the water! I too prefer the top one, nice work

Jaygre
02/25/2005, 07:37 PM
Thanks all of you for H E L P - much appreciated. I'll keep pluggin' away.

Joanie