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Oddcharacter
02/04/2005, 09:12 PM
First attempt at combineing to seperate images and mixing faces. Thanks for any insight!!
PDG
02/04/2005, 09:14 PM
Can't see the image.
MrRaven
02/04/2005, 09:25 PM
Nope! Cant see the image. Unless its a white cat in a snow storm?? :D
PDG
02/04/2005, 09:27 PM
You can see the cat, too? :D
Oddcharacter
02/04/2005, 09:29 PM
Hmmm.......uploaded it. Wonder where it went. I didnt see it to be honest after upload, figured waiting for approval.

oc..........
MrRaven
02/04/2005, 09:29 PM
You can see the cat, too?

Yeh just there in the middle. You can just make out its outline.....oops no wait!! Sorry it was hair on my monitor. lol
Oddcharacter
02/04/2005, 09:31 PM
file was too big, give me a mo (:
Oddcharacter
02/04/2005, 09:34 PM
here she is, guess who? Critique also please, my first try at this! Thanks!!
Oddcharacter
02/04/2005, 10:00 PM
WOW, it isnt that bad is it? No comments?


:sob:
PDG
02/04/2005, 10:02 PM
I cannot tell who it is. The eyes, eyebrows and lips are too big for the face. Try making them a bit smaller.
Silky
02/05/2005, 01:02 AM
I think the facial features are a bit too dark and sharp for the rest of the image. They also seem to be a bit out of proportion (the facial features appear just a bit large for the rest of the face). You did a nice job on color matching of the skin tones of the face to the hands. Overall not a bad job, just needs about another 15 minutes to make it really good! Nice work!
1cowabunga
02/05/2005, 02:55 AM
Hmm... kinda looks like Britney Spears? lol. Pretty good first try if you ask me.
MrRaven
02/05/2005, 03:16 AM
The blending in is quite good, and the colour matching is excellent. I just think the propotions of the facial features seem slightly out of place (maybe too big??) and definetly take some of the shine out. Overall tho a good job. :D
Dave
02/05/2005, 03:28 AM
It's a girl hiding behind a false beard .....
Oddcharacter
02/05/2005, 10:10 AM
Hey thanks all, its Jessica :hl: Simpson. My real crush is with her sister Ashley at the moment though :.

I think the critiques are dead on also ftr. Face a little too big, atleast where visible. Perhaps showing a little more of her cheek blending thru would have worked better. The way it is now all thats visible from her is the eyes and lips.

oc...............
castortroy
02/06/2005, 06:44 AM
the color matching is excellent.. the 2 biggest problems is that the face seems out of porportion and you can't tell its jessica simpson......
swillox
02/07/2005, 06:11 AM
^^^agreed with all,... further, she's frightening me. can be a concept on its own.