T-Shirt

[pbjorge12]

Here is another critique...It is for a tshirt I'm making of my website...Any tips? Suggestions? Critiques???

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v73/pbjorge12/ShirtFront-Back.gif

[PDG]

First off, t-shirts are hard to sell on any website. If you want to get a realistic look at the current t-shirt market, check out www.threadless.com. Only the hottest and best get printed there and not a single one advertises anything.

That being said, I don't like the design much. It's just not my personal style. I'm into t-shirts as tools for communication, not advertising. I think a simple joystick right smack in the middle would attract more buyers than all that text.

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[pbjorge12]

Really? I am not really interested in selling stuff(although it'd be nice) It is more for giving them too a couple friends and we just waer them to advertise the site and get more visits...Thanks for the tip!

I will probably make a second one seeing as how most of threadless's stuff is kinda vector/retro stuff...

[shrty]

Yeah. Only a image centered on the front, for example the joystick. And a small fontpx arial/verdana #000000 text behind that contains URL for your web-site.

[pbjorge12]

That'd probably be cheaper too...OK...So something simple and vectorish with just my site name...

[sulo]

i'd go for the simple idea of putting the joystick in the middle to. or maybe just plain on front and the joystick, a little tilted, on the right back shoulder (with the web adress in a simple font - like verdana like someone suggested). get me?

[burndog]

LIke has already been said, simplicity rules, too many elements end up competing with each other for visual attention and they all end up suffering because of it.