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capo
09/07/2004, 05:24 PM
jus a qwik 1
Dave
09/07/2004, 05:26 PM
Are you having problems uploading an image for critique? That's the kind of thing that this forum is for.
Scott
09/07/2004, 05:31 PM
Posting random comments to gain arcade access is unacceptable.

youv'e been warned.
Dave
09/07/2004, 05:35 PM
[QUOTE=Jolt]Posting random comments to gain arcade access is unacceptable.[/QUOTE]That answer hit me after I'd replied ..... I'm far too trusting for my own good :)
TrinityOfOne
09/07/2004, 06:04 PM
[QUOTE=capo]jus a qwik 1[/QUOTE]

OK, I'd take at least a point off for spelling. The sentence forming could improve a bit. I did like the subtle irony in the use of the word 'qwik'; an obvious reference, using the generic form, to the many 24 hour grocery establishments, in which the staff are often satirised as being unable to speak any English.

Over all, nothing astounding.

Hope this helps!
calamityjane
09/08/2004, 09:34 AM
Excellent critique Trin.


LOL